I read your poem Shereen and I can see how you conveyed depression in part 2. I am not sure why it didn't do well but I have had similar experiences. I published poems when I started my medium journey and they were read by one or two people. I am going to assume the lack of views could be due to a lack of readers. Medium is about building community. When I started, I felt alone and didn't have a network of people that read and encouraged me. I am sure that things have changed for you with more followers. I'd say that many of them just haven't read it yet! It doesn't mean it wasn't good enough.